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My favorite author! :blob_aww: And you should feel bad! Some people need a good kick in the ass sometimes. I always spray and neuter...

Sort of a small thing. But I recently finished the first warrior cats book. And wow, the first one makes you feel bad about spaying and...

totally understandable most of my friends that have read my book said sounded more twilight to them so on the fence with publishing lol...

Thank you, man. This is some critique I can get behind.

Just a wee bit of advice btw. The narration should feel like the character. Y'know, voice, tone and phrasing? Things that would reflect...

It’s not a dealbreaker, but it does weaken the opening because it asks the reader to process some big abstract lore before they’re...

I can get behind that. I do hold out on Akuma to keep him at a distance. It's a double edged sword.

Go for it. Also, if a plot is good, total immersion isn't fully necessary so don't worry about it so much. Some people just like to...

Right, equilateral, isosolese, scalene. A long vertex ago the four shapes lived together in harmony. Then, everything changed when the...

Ignore Eldoria projecting her hurt feelings onto random strangers like yourself. And ignore Bim being a retard. Well, since someone has...

My mom called me to vent today. Never ever has she called me just to vent about something. That's how you know the family drama is crazy