AliceMoonvale's latest activity
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Don't call me a retard, retard!
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AliceMoonvale replied to the thread Is anyone else addicted to the Ranking?.I am definitely aiming for a future rating of #69 in cannibalism in my zombie story.
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AliceMoonvale replied to the thread Feedback request on my Isekai Harem fantasy adventure.Should work on the hook, something for readers to latch onto so retention doesn't fall off after the first handful of chapters. And...
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AliceMoonvale commented on AliceMoonvale's profile post.We need more educated retards like us.
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The people that say these things are not even midwits. They're less than that. Sure, you could do an experiment to see if there is less...
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AliceMoonvale reacted to Eldoria's post in the thread Feedback request on my Isekai Harem fantasy adventure with
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Well, I don't know where you're publishing your fiction... but whether readers find a hook isn't just about a well-written narrative... -
AliceMoonvale replied to the thread Grass Supremacy Thread.
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AliceMoonvale reacted to pangmida's post in the thread just an amateur artist trying to make her own illustrations with Love.
I've obtained some new brushes, thanks to ZannaYO! :D Drew the three siblings to test them. So far, I really like them! Very fun to use...
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In theory, everything looks great, however, there’s rlly nothing that piqued my interest. No hook. Check for that
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Your synopsis still contains unnecessary infodump to make readers care. Furthermore, the personal stakes are only implied, making it...
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AliceMoonvale updated their status.
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AliceMoonvale reacted to HotConsensualSalt's post in the thread Story Time with the Meme Lady - A Feedback Thread (submit your stories!) with Like.
I predicted it would be a genre/topic, mismatch. Thank you for giving it a read and providing feedback regardless. It's difficult to get...
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I graduated from stealing socks to stealing RAM. Thank you all for your donations. YOINK!
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