I think marriage is a good thing in general one of the things that keep society together. I'm Gen Z and peoples minds are slowly changing about marriage in certain areas around here in my generation. I don't know what it is maybe the new wave of Christianity but in general I here my friends...
If you're talking about the one you're writing right now don't be so discouraged. You definitely need to write more before second guessing your story. It's just not enough like @Iwriteforfun said.
Anyone down to beta read my novel Undying: The Pit of Snakes? Need a fresh pair of eyes to see if I missed a crucial plot point or I need to fix something up!
Hey if you have time I would appreciate it if you could check out my story. Need some feedback. Thank you for your work!
Undying: The Pit of Snakes Chapter 1