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Man... I even forgot that I posted this here... but damn, it gave me some laughs and chuckles. :blob_joy: I didn't post anything on the story for two months... And damn... If you have read the 4th chapter, maybe the story got some twist, but it's pretty late for a twist or anything, like why did...

Hollow eyes- -It makes the brain work 20 times faster than superhumans or inhumans, that means a person who uses it will be faster 20 times. -The eye balls becomes black and pupils white, like a moon in abyss. -And the limitation is that it will fry the brain, just makes it bloody mess and it...

Hardest: being consistent in my writing. Nah, but fight scenes that matter and give a meaning to the story. Heaviest: children human bombs (don't ask about it, just don't) Easiest: character's inner thoughts Lightest: Writing dark, with no moral value or beyond human emotions.

So, I made a thread before, but this time I have two problems like before: I didn't know how to write fights that engage the reader, and I think I'm a little better. I don't know. My main problem is sensory details—anchors that help the reader visualize where the action is happening, like an...

Brother... See I have been in ts phase, where u want to learn drawing, but you'll see a burnt out... So be careful. And try learning basics- like work and stuff, but drawing while doing practice bcz it can be boring to create bunch of lines and circles. Good luck :blob_melt:(thou I too learned...

I have posted on three sites- 1. SH 2. RR 3. Webnovel(no contract)

So... It's a no for the contract and a yes for the exposure. Thou i knew it was bad for WN author, damn demons taking work from others. Yo, remember me... Man, thanks for helping me before, like the first time. I know I was ignorant, but now I understand my mistakes. Thanks again for the help...

But WN without a contract is fine, right? I have 6k views there, but here, 600 views...a big difference. I'm thinking of continuing my story until it becomes popular(hopefully)... then starting a Patreon for some income.

Writing is like a blank canvas that you have to fill; editing is refining mistakes in your art. My experience is that writing is more difficult because filling a blank canvas is challenging.

Oh man, I forgot this exists... Shit, I have to watch Hellsing again...

So, in my novel, there are three wars, and I didn't know how to make sense of them, so I came up with this idea while staring at the ceiling… This can sound silly, but it’s original. You might find issues with it, but it was created for me, and I’m using this in my novel. My Core Framework...

Yes... And Im sorry that didn't rewrite, as I told after the arcs end I'll rewrite it. But only for this feedback, I wrote this on my trip... On my phone, pls if this one also garbled, then...

Okay... sorry, man, this shouldn't be this complicated. That's why I told you to read the doc file... It's written recently, there r 9 acts. Read the first act. And it's canon too, like a backstory of the main character. Even now u can't do it, then wait for 2 days bcz im on a trip... Hope...

Okay, uhhh. Read 7th chapter of the pristine(my novel) that's the newest one and in it i wrote in my style... https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1614643-the-pristine/chapter/1786828/ This one is better that my first chapter or i think... Sorry for asking you read 26 page long document, i thought...

Man ur reading my lackluster writing there... Sigh, that chapter was my first 'try' in writing. But okay. I was going rewrite it after the arcs end with my new style. Hey, but I got better each chapter. (I know yll drop it after the first chapter...) ?