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One of my largest pet peeves is with survival stories, because there's way too many of them that completely ignore multiple important aspects of survival chalking it up to magic or even straight up not mentioning them at all. Diseases for one and exhaustion (both mental and physical) for two, and those are just simplest examples.
 

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I dislike it when authors take down large chunks of the story after they post on Amazon or something, especially if it's after the first few chapters or so.
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I always abandon those stories, sometimes even if I was one of the few people following the story from the start
I consider it scummy and refuse to read stories after it Happens those authors will never see a penny of my money
It would be one thing to say the sequel is/will be available for sale after they finish the first book it's another to get people invested only to have the carpet pulled out from under them
 
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I dislike it when authors take down large chunks of the story after they post on Amazon or something, especially if it's after the first few chapters or so.
ex ch5- ch179
I always abandon those stories, sometimes even if I was one of the few people following the story from the start
What if they are contractually bound. Should they take down the whole story?
 

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Pushing an agenda is a pet peeve of mine. Can't read the news anywhere anymore because of it.
I don't know if it's an agenda but I hate when the author gives an opinion about how society works like it's the absolute truth through their characters.
It's good when it's obvious that the character is flawed, like one in a Youjo Senki fanfic that the character dies because he operates in a "logic" way instead of considering the feelings of another person.
 

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I consider it scummy and refuse to read stories after it Happens those authors will never see a penny of my money
It would be one thing to say the sequel is/will be available for sale after they finish the first book it's another to get people invested only to have the carpet pulled out from under them
The reason to go to Amazon is to sell to a wider audience, and selling only sequels is a terrible business decision if you're doing that. No one buying books on Amazon is going to go over to Scribblehub or wherever to read the first book first, or just read the sequel.

I don't personally plan to shift any of my current stuff to Amazon, but that's more because my stuff is against Amazon's ToS, rather than thinking it's morally wrong to do so.

Stories have been used to push agendas since antiquity.
Even if you don't mean to push an agenda... if you're emulating a world, you're either going to base it on your views, or your understandings of someone else's. You can't have a story without some kind of opinion on how the world works baked into it to some extent, because you are imagining a world, and it invariably has to follow rules of some kind.

It's true some stories are way more didactic than others, and some are actual propaganda, though.
 
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The reason to go to Amazon is to sell to a wider audience, and selling only sequels is a terrible business decision if you're doing that. No one buying books on Amazon is going to go over to Scribblehub or wherever to read the first book first, or just read the sequel.

I don't personally plan to shift any of my current stuff to Amazon, but that's more because my stuff is against Amazon's ToS, rather than thinking it's morally wrong to do so.


Even if you don't mean to push an agenda... if you're emulating a world, you're either going to base it on your views, or your understandings of someone else's. You can't have a story without some kind of opinion on how the world works baked into it to some extent, because you are imagining a world, and it invariably has to follow rules of some kind.

It's true some stories are way more didactic than others, and some are actual propaganda, though.
It's true. You should try to avoid preaching to the reader as much as possible, but your opinions will paint your writing. That is how we get insight into a writers thoughts.
 

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The reason to go to Amazon is to sell to a wider audience, and selling only sequels is a terrible business decision if you're doing that. No one buying books on Amazon is going to go over to Scribblehub or wherever to read the first book first, or just read the sequel.

I don't personally plan to shift any of my current stuff to Amazon, but that's more because my stuff is against Amazon's ToS, rather than thinking it's morally wrong to do so.
1 In regards to it being a "terrible business decision" you've never fished before have you? You need to invest in bait to catch the fish.
The gaming industry figured this out long ago with demos and now DLCs

2 Why WOULDN'T people be interested to go to a different site to read a entire book for free?
"Oh no ? I was intrigued by this book on Amazon but in order to read the first book I would need to go elsewhere and read it for FREE!!! I could never do such a thing eww that sounds like something a peasant would do"
 
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1 In regards to it being a "terrible business decision" you've never fished before have you? You need to invest in bait to catch the fish.
The gaming industry figured this out long ago with demos and now DLCs

2 Why WOULDN'T people be interested to go to a different site to read a entire book for free?
"Oh no ? I was intrigued by this book on Amazon but in order to read the first book I would need to go elsewhere and read it for FREE!!! I could never do such a thing eww that sounds like something a peasant would do"
I agree more with @Succubiome here. People going to Amazon finding new books won't look for the sequels first, and they will move onto something else if they can't find the book on the platform.
 

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1 In regards to it being a "terrible business decision" you've never fished before have you? You need to invest in bait to catch the fish.
The gaming industry figured this out long ago with demos and now DLCs

2 Why WOULDN'T people be interested to go to a different site to read a entire book for free?
"Oh no ? I was intrigued by this book on Amazon but in order to read the first book I would need to go elsewhere and read it for FREE!!! I could never do such a thing eww that sounds like something a peasant would do"
In gamer terms, if I find a paid game on Playstation and the prequel is free on PC, me and most people wouldn't go out of the way to play it on PC
 
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In gamer terms, if I find a paid game on Playstation and the prequel is free on PC, me and most people wouldn't go out of the way to play it on PC
There is also the thought process of free being of lower quality (even if that isn't true). People would be more likely to think the author isn't professional.
 

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I agree more with @Succubiome here. People going to Amazon finding new books won't look for the sequels first, and they will move onto something else if they can't find the book on the platform.
Because people are inherently lazy. Too many button pushing to put in a title into any search engine. It's unfortunate but, it is what it is.

I hate litrpg's with Ability Scores. Those things are absolutely useless in a novel.

Crafting that ignores the inventions in-between inventions. Especially when magic can't wave away some specific qualities to the progress of civilization. @Tyranomaster is doing a great job at it though. Go read his book.
 

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This thread evolved from me complaining to another discussion about Amazon (this time it's more civil though)
We live in a society.
 
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